A taster- The Fire Creature

October 25th, 2010 by mooney

The night was dark and frosty. A thick freezing fog was hanging in the air, and the damp cold smell of winter was prominent. There was a putrid, musty smell of age and decomposition in the forest that night. The place was a large forest in the middle of England; the time was long, long ago before the earth was fully formed. Silence echoed in the stillness of the black impenetrable night, nothing stirred, not a man, or a mouse’(Copywrite Nicola Mooney 2010)

Then a hunched silhouette pierced the stillness as it moved at the edge of the forest. It advanced quickly and stealthily under cover of the huge oaks, moving with surprising agility and grace as its form was bent over and hunched. It was completely naked, the stringy sinewy muscles of its limbs visible through its thin greenish skin. It moved noiselessly through the trees, the thin hunched skeletal form moved effortlessly into the forest.

The creature did not seem to feel the sharp scratch of the thorns in the undergrowth, or the extreme cold. The trees appeared to part as the creature came near, not wanting to touch the evil looking thing.

The strangest thing about this creature was that it glowed – a warm orange light emanated from two large orbs at the front of its head. Its thin bony face wore an expression of contempt. It stopped and sniffed the air with it long wolf like snout. Its long sharp teeth were visible at the side of its thin lips, which oozed a thick green saliva.

The ugly, Goblin like creature suddenly stopped as if disturbed from its nightly prowling. It glanced around and fixed its fiery gaze onto a tree to its right. Then a spark flew from the creature and the tree was set alight. The creature gave a smug look as if pleased with itself.

As it emerged from the forest the fire creature moved quickly, leaving a scene of devastation behind it, as by now most of the plants in the forest were burning and would perish in the roar of the red-hot flames.

The fire creature uttered a horrible sound that could be heard for miles, but the earth lay new and dormant and there were no other living beings around to hear the sound. The earth where the fire creature stood warped and convulsed and the creature changed shape and disappeared into the black hole, which seemed to penetrate to the very bowels of the earth.

Centuries past and the new world burnt in the form of volcanoes, their hot molten lather creating new landscapes as they destroyed and deformed everything in their path. The earth perished and smouldered under the bubbling all powerful lather , which burnt and decayed all in its path. The deformed bent and shadowy form of the fire creature appeared from underground all over the now sparse blackened planet. Not a sound was heard except the wind playing amongst the trees with icy finger whispering,beware, beware.

Decades later the earth once again lay peaceful and quiet, as if expectant of the sunshine to come. Trees and vegetation once more covered the barren land making it lush and green. It seemed that a new force came into being asif the earth had rid itself of degradation and destruction. Beautiful flowers and animals relished the earth

Animals went about their business of finding food, hunting other of the now many species, or foraging amongst the lush green vegetation for insects and roots. Sounds of birds filled the air and in the blue sky the sun gentle warmed the fields and crops below.

Man evolved into this new and vibrant world, and after thousands of years began to settle down in villages. Millennia passed and they learnt how to farm animals – and grow crops. They formed family and community units and learnt how to make tools and most importantly fire to keep warm and cook. Little did they realise that this had stirred a dark and brooding force deep within the earth. His awakening had kindled a desire so rank and horrible that the power within it surged and grew.

I wish I was

August 31st, 2010 by mooney

I wish I was a committed blogger,
I wish I knew how, to gain someone’s interest,
So they would all say WOW!
I wish I was a blogger, who spent all night on line,
Who could write non stop, except to drink a little wine.
wine I wish I knew how, to be published and admired.
I wish I knew how do blog all day and not get fired.
I wish I could blog life changing information,
But I’ll just say, I’m here , let me know about your latest creation.

Children’s Poetry

August 23rd, 2010 by mooney

Hello All, I would appreciate any replies to this. Has anyone written any Children;s Poe try and had it published?  I wrote poetry (simple stuff, such as; “school dinners taste of dirt and muck, and if you ever eat them I wish you luck.” when I was young.  I was wondering if it had a market out there, what is the concensus.

Regards

Nicola

Children’s factual books

August 8th, 2010 by mooney

Hello all, I am new to this and want to ask some questions. 

1.  Any chidlren’s authors out there who have had success with chidlren’s book about medical conditions or hospital procedures. Trying to explain in simple language the experiences that the child is having. I have written a book about being admitted to hospital with an asthma attack and about a condition called Turner Syndrome.  I worked in hospital as a Play Therapist  and feel that there are not many factual practical books out there for young children and their parents.

2. Any authors out there had success with childrens fanatasy books about aliens and magic.  Another book I have written is about an alien and his adventures with a clourful magic hat. 

Just wondered what genre was favoured in chidlren’s books and any hints on what makes a successful picture book for young chilren.

Any replies appreciated

Nicola Mooney

Starting to blog

July 12th, 2010 by mooney

HI,  my name is Nicola and I am a new author and new to blogging.  I am a children’s writer, focusing on the younger age group and picture books.  i work with children so have a good idea of developmental levels, but want some advise on how to break into this field and how to use this blogging website successfully.

Any repllies appreciated.

Thanks

Nicola Mooney

Hello world!

July 7th, 2010 by mooney

Hello Everyone , my name is Nicola and I am a children’s writer as yet unpublished. I am British but live in Sydney Austrailia and am married(no kids).  My day job is a Paediatric Occupational Therapist, which keeps me busy.  I have written a fanatasy picture book called “Tommy the Alien and his Magic Hat.” Two picture books about medical conditions – Turner Syndrome and Asthma,  to assist  parents and children with  hospital and medical procedures.  I have started a longer fantasy  novel about a character called the “Fire Creature”, which is for older teenaged children.  This is my first blog and I am putting out feelers of how best to use the blog and would appreciate advise on how to use it.

Any replies appreciated.

Kind Regards

Nicola Mooney